Monday, May 13, 2013
Bel Canto Notes; Cacophony and Terrorism
Friday, May 10, 2013
End Notes
I hope things are going well with the multigenre essays. There was a great article about writing, by the way, in a recent issue (April 29) of The New Yorker: John McPhee's "Draft No. 4." You might check it out if you get a chance, especially since he writes so well about the agonies all of us endure anytime we sit down to write something. Here's a brief teaser: "You are working on a first draft and small wonder you're unhappy. If you lack confidence in setting one word after another and sense that you are stuck in a place from which you will never be set free, if you feel sure that you will never make it and were not cut out to do this, if your prose seems stillborn and you completely lack confidence, you must be a writer. If you say you see things differently and describe your efforts positively, if you tell people that you 'just love to write,' you may be delusional.... First drafts are slow and develop clumsily, because every single sentence affects not only those before it but also those that follow.... There are psychological differences from phase to phase, and the first is the phase of the pit and the pendulum.... For me, the hardest part comes first, getting something -- anything -- out in front of me. Sometimes in a nervous frenzy I just fling words as if I were flinging mud at a wall. Blurt out, heave out, babble out something -- anything -- as a first draft. With that, you have achieved a sort of nucleus. Then, as you work it over and alter it, you begin to shape sentences that score higher with the ear and eye. Edit again -- top to bottom. The chances are that about now you'll be seeing something that you are sort of eager for others to see. And all that takes time.... Without the drafted version -- if it did not exist -- you obviously would not be thinking of things that would improve it. In short, you may be actually writing only two or three hours a day, but your mind, in one way or another, is working on it twenty-four hours a day -- yes, while you sleep -- but only if some sort of draft or earlier version already exists. Until it exists, writing has not really begun." Unfortunately, because of the pressures and compacted time of the semester, we don't often enough get to pursue this process of "drafts." It's like Kundera's "unbearable lightness of being" that comes from the awareness that there is no dress rehearsal for our lives: we just have to go on stage cold. Well, anyway, I will look forward to reading your essays when the time comes.
Well, there it is: "Now my charms are all o'erthrown," lamented Prospero (which is not to say I won't return to post again!). Thank you for all of your hard work, good cheer, and many contributions to the course. As I noted on Wednesday, I feel like I've lived the material in many ways during the semester (in good ways and, lately, in unwanted ways); as we head into the graduation, and into the summer and beyond, perhaps we can all remember Charlie Parker's advice that "if you don't live it, it won't come out your horn." After I've had the chance to recover, to "sleep like a rock or a man that's dead," I'm assuming the "thump, thump, thump" will start kicking in again, and I'll start looking towards the next iteration of the class. You and your contributions will be an important part of it when I do. And maybe someday we'll meet again under the tamarind tree! All the best ...
Tuesday, May 7, 2013
Of Slender Silver Slivers
Thursday, May 2, 2013
e krii?
I'm repeating myself in this instance, of course, but I always get jazzed by the way disparate texts end up speaking to one another in a class like this: thus my repeated reference to the fact that one intertext (from early in the semester) that sheds some useful comparative light on the situation and dilemma of the character of Chamoiseau, the "word-scratcher," is Blake's "Introduction" to the Songs of Innocence. As you recall, the piper in that poem is commanded first to pipe, then to sing, and then to write, and with each step in the sequence there seems to be a kind of diminishment that occurs (until finally the child vanishes when he sits down to write, and then he subsequently "stain'd the water clear"). Solibo warns Chamoiseau of a similar peril in moving from an oral to a written mode of expression, and the latter finally laments the situation: "In rereading my first notes from the time I followed him around the market, I understood that to write down the word was nothing but betrayal, you lost the intonations, the parody, the storyteller's gestures, and all of this was made even more unthinkable for I knew Solibo was hostile to it. But I called myself a "word scratcher," a pathetic gatherer of elusive things, like the draft through the wind's cathedrals" (158). Of course, without the efforts of the word scratcher we wouldn't have the novel, and Chamoiseau must be commended for making such a sonorous, musical, and rhythmic text, and for honoring the oral tradition in the process.
If you read through the novel again in light of my attempt to link it with Bakhtin and the carnivalesque, you'll undoubtedly find a good many passages that become newly relevant to you. The events of the novel take place during Carnival, of course, and the nature of those events, and the manner of the transactions between the witnesses/mourners and the police emerge from Bakhtin's characterizations: e.g., "The whole place soon began to resemble a market during the sale of red pepper. Screaming. Astonishment. Sympathies offered to the line of witnesses. Curses of mysterious origin in the direction of the policemen" (68). There are also the various references to laughter, including the "thick and greasy laughs" when "all were displaying molars" (62), laughter which often serves to undermine institutional power. And there's still so much more we could say about wakes and quiverings in the context of this novel, too. Given that this is a novel about the processual, fluid, and multiple nature of identity, how appropriate that it's focused on the transition between life and death; we're reminded that death induces us to look at life as a process of change, and brings with it a kind of poetics of liminality in which there are no easy answers or categorizations (which creates rich overlap, potentially, with Kay's Trumpet). These poetics call upon the performance of storytellers, too, and somehow I find myself thinking of the various itinerant bards we've encountered in this course: Mr. Tambourine Man, perhaps; the squeezebox singer in the Martin Sexton song we listened to; Mikey Smith (whose "Me Cyann Believe It" we'll listen to on Monday); Robert Johnson and then the crossroads bluesman in the O Brother film clip; Solibo; Medouze in the Black Shack Alley film clip; et al.
Finally, there are a good many wonderfully evocative and poignant moments of writing in this novel, which are worth contemplating in isolation. An example: "That scene lasted forever -- and could have gone on and on: a tafia-soused audience, sitting in a circle at the crack of dawn, does not inscribe itself in the ephemeral. But then, after eons (exactly three hours, thirty-eight minutes, and twenty-two seconds, says the coroner), a basaltic old man left the assembly and made toward Solibo. His name was Congo and he seemed to owe Death four centuries" (16). Or this one, on memory and grieving, and on storytelling's solace: "Sidonise, who had seemed for a few moments to be drowning in another world, starts to murmur an inaudible story. A strange smile transfigures her pain, her eyes follow the flight of internal visions. There is a prowling memory there, of those that death, in its tide, drains from our heads, our hearts, our dreams. Oh life plays hide-and-seek, never giving all of herself at once, but leaving to death's seasons the essence of her stems, her flowers' subtle perfume. There, through the small sherbet vendor, Solibo confronts our distress, dissipates it, as certain churches do the sadness of the devoted. Charlo' forgets his cheek and raises his inundated eyes" (78-9). Perhaps you have other examples that you would add to the list ...
Hope you enjoy Bel Canto this week & weekend ...
Wednesday, May 1, 2013
A Musical Inventory
When we were talking about the healing power of art last week (during our discussion of elegiac writing vis-a-vis Sheffield, Lethem, et al.), and after the reference to Mrs. Ramsay's metaphorical green shawl in To the Lighthouse, which covers over the pig skull and, symbolically, death, I promised to get a quote to you by Jane Hirshfield (from her essay "Poetry and the Constellation of Surprise") about poetry's efficacy. Here it is: “It is, of course, we who house poems as much as their words, and we ourselves must be the locus of poetry's depth of newness. Still, the permeability seems to travel both ways: a changed self will find new meanings in a good poem, but a good poem also changes the shape of the self. Having read it, we are not who we were the moment before.... Art lives in what it awakens in us... Through a good poem's eyes we see the world liberated from what we would have it do. Existence does not guarantee us destination, nor trust, nor equity, nor one moment beyond this instant's almost weightless duration. It is a triteness to say that the only thing to be counted upon is that what you count on will not be what comes. Utilitarian truths evaporate: we die. Poems allow us not only to bear the tally and toll of our transience, but to perceive, within their continually surprising abundance, a path through the grief of that insult into joy.” Lovely stuff, really. It applies to music, as well (and will no doubt register with those of you writing about grief, consolation, healing in your multi genre essays) -- that ability to help us "bear the tally and toll of our transience," but, more than that, to help us come out from the other side of that grief ("that insult") into a kind of joy.
Finally, as I start to get a bit recapitulatory and retrospective in my thinking relative to our course, I was reminded of the DNA assignment you all completed and thought I should post some DNA material of my own. It's more list-like in nature, but you'll notice that in the "elsewheres" section to the right I've posted a link to "Eric's Top 145" -- the 145 songs that I feel I can least do without in life! As I indicate on the page, it's a rather absurd endeavor to identify these songs, but I suspect at least 2/3 of them could withstand the fluctuations of my daily whims! It's not always a list based on perceived quality, of course -- oftentimes the songs are simply ones that were hard-coded into my being by the events and contexts of my life, and thus they will always have special significance to me (even if you find yourself thinking, Blue Oyster Cult? Really?!).
One other way of measuring the passage of time this semester (on a personal level) is to list all of the music I have purchased or downloaded during the semester. It would include the following: Tegan and Sara -- Heartthrob; Local Natives -- Hummingbird; Bowerbirds -- The Clearing; Goodnight Texas -- A Long Life of Living; Hey Marseilles -- Lines We Trace; Andrew Bird -- Hands of Glory; Martin Sexton -- Live at the Fillmore and Live in Portland; The Tallest Man on Earth -- There's No Leaving Now; Samantha Crain -- Kid Face; Pearl Jam -- assorted songs; Fossil Collective -- assorted songs; Iron & Wine -- Ghost on Ghost; Laura Stevenson -- Wheel; The National -- Trouble Will Find Me; Patty Griffin -- American Kid. (Those last two records won't be released until this Tuesday, but they'll be in my possession shortly thereafter!).